slipping seemingly sweetly softly, or soundly, notched suddenly by this standard
perspective practically reverts because reality couldn’t sustain
permanent grounds were made to stay
foreign roots choke those rough place
seeds couldn’t bury their seeds couldn’t barry
bury their weakness and force them to convert now
seemingly quiet the roads ran out of distance
running from themselves stuck out of position
rancid concrete and timid feet found no fibers nearby
these lifeless skies absent from true direction
floating seemingly asunder
sustaining proper tides of boundless winds
tossing bodies eternally
Epilogue:
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Your poetry is beautifully worded!
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Wow, thank you so much 🙂
I didn’t expect any feedback on this poem in particular because of how abstract this felt but I’m really glad you enjoyed my piece.
Also sorry for getting back to you late I was asleep when you commented.
So Thanks for your support and stay tuned for more writing from me, which I believe you have been following me for a little while if I recall correctly
If you want me to look at any of your work I would love to make an analysis of it, which that would take roughly 3-5days or so
So let me know if you are interested but for now
Ado my dear patron
-N3xtra
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I would be honored to receive an analysis from you! Just know that I write to share my heart with others.🙂 Not looking for any notoriety.🙂 I indeed have been reading and following your gift of words and talent! Take care! And enjoying your living!☀️🌷🙂
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